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omgzeke
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| 07/13/2008 8:31 PM |
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Hey guys, I wrote a graphic novel and recently had a friend start illustrating it because I thought her artstyle would go with the type of story, I was right. Here is a random page from I KILLED HER DEAD, my black and white graphic novel about a hitman who sees the ghosts of those who kill.  |
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Bub
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| 07/16/2008 10:26 PM |
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| Looks good might want to put boxes around the letters and thicker lines on the top panel to seperate the pics more.. |
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atomicdani
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| 08/11/2008 5:59 PM |
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| It looks great. just need some more shading to give some texture and depth then probably add a white border around the letters to make them stand out. Also give it a more professional look :) |
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